Wednesday, September 2, 2009
Tea Break
After reviewing what used to be titled "4. The Inheritance of the Old Hurt", I realized it was too long to read casually in one sitting. I wrote the article with such feverish concentration, that I didn't realize how long it actually was, even after having it edited several times and re-reading it. It also seemed that the article contained 2 separate parts describing separate issues.
So I separated them into 2 articles. They are now "4. The Secret of the 'Perfect Village' " and "5. The Inheritance of the Old Hurt." Some thoughts that were lacking in the original version were added, to both of the new articles. I believe my views are presented clearer this way.
Comments people graciously posted with "4. The Secret of the 'Perfect Village' " are actually for the article before I split them in halves.
I regret that it may be confusing for readers who have already read the old version. I hope you'll see an improvement, if you happened to have enough interest left to read the new version.
I am learning as I go, and I appreciate your support.
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